Wednesday, September 16, 2009

My Very Big Little World

I did not like the picture book My Very Big Little World by Peter H. Reynolds. The story was very choppy. It went from one thing to another without transitions. My largest problem is that is difficult to understand who the narrator of the story is without looking back. I had to reread the story three times before I realized who was narrating. The story starts off by saying, "My name is Sugarloaf.." and then two pages later it says, "Sugarlump is my baby sister.." which makes the story confusing because I assumed Sugarloaf and Sugarlump were the same person. I would not recommend this book.

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